Volume 15: The Myriad Betrayals

“Volume 15: The Myriad Betrayals” is the fourth installment in my Overlord fanfiction series. It follows the events of my Volume 14: Unlikely Allies, with the two parts covering the Slane Theocracy’s attack on Nazarick and its fall out.

The saga of the great Philip is coming to an end and its conclusion will leave the Re-Estize Kingdom in a mess. Meanwhile, the Slane Theocracy has assembled their allied strike force and are planning to launch a surprise attack against the Sorcerer King’s servants, after being invited inside the Great Tomb of Nazarick. To add to the chaos, the Platinum Dragon Lord decided to join the fray via his “Sir Armoreth” suit of armor.

But soon they will all learn the truth. The truth which the Guardians realized long ago — everyone dances in the palm of the Supreme One.

Volume 15: The Myriad Betrayals

Prologue                                        Chapter 1, part 1

Chapter 1, part 2                            Chapter 1, part 3

Chapter 1, part 4                            Chapter 2, part 1

Chapter 2, part 2                            Chapter 2, part 3

Chapter 2, part 4                            Intermission

Chapter 3, part 1                            Chapter 3, part 2

Chapter 3, part 3                            Chapter 3, part 4

Chapter 4, part 1                            Chapter 4, part 2

Chapter 4, part 3                            Chapter 4, part 4

Chapter 4, part 5                            Chapter 4, part 6

Chapter 4, part 7                            Chapter 4, part 8

Chapter 5, part 1                            Chapter 5, part 2

Chapter 5, part 3                            Chapter 5, part 4

Chapter 5, part 5                            Chapter 5, part 6

Chapter 5, part 7                            Chapter 5, part 8

Chapter 5, part 9                            Chapter 5, part 10

Chapter 5, part 11                          Chapter 5, part 12

Chapter 5, part 13                          Chapter 5, part 14

Chapter 5, part 15                          Chapter 5, part 16

Chapter 5, part 17                          Chapter 5, part 18

Chapter 5, Part 19                          Chapter 5, Part 20

Epilogue                                         From the Author

241 Comments on “Volume 15: The Myriad Betrayals”

    • Well according to the author’s “affirmations” this magic is capable of making anything impossible possible (this is different from doing the impossible of the omnipotent, well an omnipotent cannot kill another since it is “impossible” but as this is the usefulness of magic it yes it is capable of killing an omnipotent) that is if it is impossible to manipulate the truth itself this magic will make the Ainz able to manipulate the truth, so I believe Ainz is capable of martial arts

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  3. Everyone going to get massacre by Shalltear and Gargantua and 🙁 if they see Rubedo, they properly going to killed themself before they capture or revive to be in Demiurge happy farm 🙁 everyone who attack Nazarick going to be in the happy farm and supply a lot of scroll not to mention breeding supply for Demi who soon going be another supply. Look like Demi going to be busy for a while after the attack hahha

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  5. im sorry can i know when will evileye get rekt? i’ll promptly skip it – those chapters – as i don’t want to see my waifu died or tortured. thanks for your consideration!

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        • he surely wont die before he bring the true justice back to this world by killing that wicked undead and its servants, not to mention giving our heroine a baby

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      • hopefully so, except i couldnt help but think whether the theory stating that momon is sorcerer king in disguise were actually true or not.

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        • momon chỉ là hình tượng của mọi người vì thế bất kì ai cũng có khả năng cải trang thành anh ta nhưng cần phù hợp với chỉ số sức mạnh và ngoại hình >.<

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      • Already see that scene – Ainz confront Momon(Pandora) before everyone: “Momon, I am your father! Your memory is fake and now is time to truly come back to my side.” 😀

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  8. Before the end of this volume, can you make a Cliffhanger with Deep Darkness Dragon Lord and Ainz (or at least a cameo)?

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  10. What happened to the updates lol. I keep on refreshing my bookmark because I thought there’s one last January 7 (a monday) and today (a Friday). I’m in withdrawal, I need my Overlord fix XD

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  15. Yes im wondering the same. No update yesterday (friday 18th). I dont think we can expect every monday and friday eventhough that is what it says 🙄. Jac Will you update us on this please.

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  19. Year it annoying having to keep updating based on the info we Got. Conclusion is that the date and time Jac mentions are not reliable. But as mentioned hes doing this on his own so we have to just be patient. Its worth waiting for. Awsome story.

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  21. Thanks for the update. Take your time. Better that its well thought out than rushing it and being bad. So No worries. Just make sure to keep update Even if its just to post that you are deleyed.

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  22. Thanks for the update.Though I’m still impatient about the promised chapters 😉
    Any how take your time, don’t try to rush it and make a *#@* out of it….

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  23. I wouldn’t push yourself too hard. Just get back to the regular monday and friday updates. Three chapters a week is too much.

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    • I hope not because I really like it. Jac could at least post when to expect the next chapter. That thing about Thursday was last week.

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  27. Just be patient guys. He stated before he has a nasty writer’s block. You need to give him to time to work through it. THIS IS DONE IN HIS SPARE TIME. It is not a job.

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  29. PLEASE!!!!! PLEASE DON’T LEAVE ME!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT IS THE BEST AND MOST FLUSHED OUT ONE I HAVE EVER READ! I HAVE BEEN FOLLOWING SINCE ABOUT HALF OF THE WAY THROUGH VOL 14!!

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  30. Know that you are facing a writers block but pls update the homepage every now and then ….. U know just to let us know ur still active and the story is dead

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  31. Know that you are facing a writers block but pls update the homepage every now and then ….. U know just to let us know ur still active and the story IS NOT dead

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  36. maybe you should give up on finishing this in 15 volumes and make 16?
    you have fallen to same “trap” that the original writer and made too many things 😛

    just my thought on it…

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  37. R u ded bro? Have you stop writing? it becoming pain in the ass checking every day so when will you release chapters 3 part 4, the only overlord sustanance I Got is from ur lovely fanfiction and overlord wn translated by frostfire

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  38. I’m going to say this while theres a chance that the author will still read it. Please don’t drop the story right at the climax of your multi-work series! It just wouldn’t be fair! You have an awesome idea and to have that die out is just… outrageous.

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  43. PLease write something I know that you can do it. I love this series please write something I’m sure it will be good
    XXX

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  44. I’ll say this while there’s a chance that it will be read…
    Please don’t stop right before the climax. That’s just wrong. I don’t mind if you don’t do vol 16 but PLEASE Do this volume. Please, I’d literally pay you to do it. Please don’t drop this great story!

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  45. This as going to be the last day I checked this site before abandoning it, glad to see you updated the homepage, and I look forward to reading the rest of the volume.

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  53. Bakara stop complaining, you and your alts have been doing nothing but complaining in the last 4 out of 5 comments. stop with the spam already.

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  54. Okay. I don’t know if anyone’s notice but it is Tuesday. I am not complaining or anything but at least give us an hour to be looking forward to.

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  64. Lol. Heck it could be Sunday next year for all we know (was supposed to be this previous Sunday but who’s keeping count, definitely not us, right XD). We were going/HOPING to get 4 parts in total this week but it’s already the weekend ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
    Already stopped expecting the schedules to stick — we just need to wait more, this ain’t our first rodeo. He’ll get to it… eventually 😉

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  67. Still alive ?
    I pray to the supreme beings and the Flying spaghetti monster, that everything is good.

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  69. honestly I really like your story … I always waiting every week … but if the schedule isn’t compatible maybe I should give up your story and look for another story

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  71. This is the 3rd Sunday since he said part 4 would be released. I wish he would at least update the post, being in the dark drives me crazy.

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  75. Sorry i’m new here..
    is this the translation of WN written by the overlord creator or fanfiction story ?
    thank you in advance

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  77. It’s already past 1pm on Sunday and part 5 hasn’t been posted. Did say there was another delay? I waited till 1am last night to read but part 5 wasn’t posted. But he said it would be at 11pm on Saturday.

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  80. I’d honestly just do one update a week… You’ll have the entirety of the weekend to work on writing it and the weekdays to plan it out. That seems a lot more reasonable.

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  81. Agreed. While I would like to read as soon as possible, he probably misses his own deadlines because he doesn’t give himself enough time. Even today he said part 5 would be out this morning,but it’s now past 11pm.

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  82. Your name should be procrastination jac. we are ready to wait for couples of week for your update. BUt try to keep your words. I mean you post update on ur page that you will update net chapter but you never did it on time. Atleast give us honest time and date

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  85. We waited over 3 weeks before he posted part 4. Now it has been over 2 weeks past the deadline on his last update. We have been doing a lot of waiting lately.

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  86. funny how much people complain looking that we can read it free when it comes out…
    like the saying goes. delayed game is eventually good, rushed is forever bad… turn that to book -> game 🙂 like his typesetters said before that “this is subpar chapter” well i rather have good chapters than rushed stuff.

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    • I know you’re right. But it is always disappointing when it’s not posted when he says it will be and frustrating when he makes no update after he misses his self-made deadlines.

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  87. The thing is, people understand that Jac does this without any profit to himself or to anyone else, and they’re not insensitive ingrates to not appreciate his commitment or quality of work. The problem arises when Jac himself insists on including deadlines to his chapters, and making promises on returning to his schedule and posting the next chapter by an estimated date. If the date he posts is incredibly ambitious and he feels he can’t keep up, he doesn’t release it, and that’s not all, he also oftentimes maintains absolute radio silence until he posts the next chapter when he can. This cycle of constant hopeful waiting, disappointments, then looking forward to the chapter with a bitter taste for as long as it takes to release…. it’s a journey that could have been avoided had Jac only known to curb his over-enthusiastic optimism and give his readers a proper deadline instead of ones he cannot meet due to several personal reasons

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    • If he feels he has trouble due to personal reasons, and external academic pressure or anything of the kind, instead of still being hopeful of releasing a chapter in a cramped schedule, he could place the deadline a long time later, whatever he does, all the readers want from him is to honour his deadlines, irrespective of when it is updated to be. That his readers love his content and wish more from him despite feeling disappointed by his update times is proven by how many still return religiously back to his website every day to check whether he updated.. despite knowing deep down that he hasn’t.

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  88. Calm down people. Judging from the situation, this time is different. Something ought to be happened.

    He’s either sick or deadly sick, or just caught up in an accident. Let’s pray that he’s still alive and safe somewhere, somehow

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  89. seriously people were so toxic this time around. Grow up, I’m still waiting 3 months later for some fanfics. This is nothing.

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    • Calm down, he is probably prioritizing things more relevant in his life such as a paying career or his education. And of course she could simply now it’s have the best health.

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  92. Calm down, he is probably prioritizing things more relevant in his life such as a paying career or his education. And of course he could simply not it’s have the best health.

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  93. Thank you Jac for creating this awesome fic. Take your time and do your own things. Also you’re not obligated to write for others if you’re not feeling it. It is understandable, and I also hope you’re doing well.

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  96. First of all I would like to congratulate you for creating this splendid story !! that even changing the events of the original story followed the same context and did not lose the nucleus of the original!! my only regret is the fact that you did not do it at the beginning I would really like to see how you would work the parts with nynha, archer and in a way imina too!! I particularly do not like the end that the author gave to them not so much as I would like to see more romance between the Ains and Alberdo and the Fortear !! No more thank you from the heart for giving us this story!!!

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    • Jac stopped making release date anouncements because of complaints for not making the deadline. There is just no way to know when he will release the next one and of course something may have happened that is preventing him from working on it.

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  103. I wonder if Ainz would let Mare fight Zeshi, that would be great. In the official overlord series, Demiurg advised and Ainz indicated the desire for the Dark Elf twins to find Elves and other Dark Elves to have children with. Also, Zeshi expressed a disire to have the child of whoever was strong enough to beat her and it didn’t if the person was human. In this fanime series Zeshi seems to have interest in Mare and Mare openly stated that he liked her. So if Mare fought and beat Zeshi, they are likely to get very close.

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  106. Nice job man, you rock, if it isn’t too much to ask, can we get a progress bar, notice or report, cause I’m experiencing overlord withdrawals.

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  111. JACK IS BACK!

    he is updating the message board with multiple sentences, and more information!

    He is uploading multiple times a week! And they are all quality! When he misses a deadline he updates the message board that he will get it out the next day not the next week, or sometime this month!

    It’s great to be back to where we were earlier this year with weekly uploads that I would wait with baited breath for

    I love the stuff this man writes, I just which I could help him write more of it!

    Thanks for your continued efforts jac!!
    We appreciate you!!

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    • Thank you for this amazing fanfic Jac, love your hard work. I know you have not uploaded any more chapters for a while but I will wait no matter how long it takes! Hope you are alright, have a good life!

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  121. Any idea when part 14 of chapter 5 will be ready? It seems like it has been a while since the last release.

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  122. Jac, I’m turning to pure bones with saturated calcium here, com’on,
    WE WANT TO READ!
    WE WANT TO READ!
    WE WANT TO READ!
    …

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  123. It seems this 14th part will be mystic in its nature – everyone heard about it, but no one have seen it 🙂

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  124. Refresh refresh refresh…not yet eh?
    Don’t want Jac to sacrifice quality for speed, but I thought this was an opportune time to say how much I love this fan fiction.

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    • Naw bud, I feel like it’s now that bad yet eh? Part 13 came out January 8th I believe going by comment dates). Plus Jac isn’t just translating….he’s making this ….art. Quite a masterpiece really. If the muse isn’t upon him there’s just nothing for it but to wait.

      Just saying, have hope. If Jac hasn’t given up, then it’s not over (he has read Maruyama’s vol 14 now so we might get a nice treat soon).

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  127. now that you said it i totally forgot that the original one got released a few weeks ago and that jac also uses some of its content for story material

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  128. Firslty :Thank you jaco-nue

    Second: your wreting these four volumes are Soo Great
    your writing are amazing

    I want you to not forget some of the points mentioned by the author and have not been detailed yet
    And its secrets were not revealed
    In V10: Albedo says she can obey Anise in everything but one thing not
    And in V11: in Kingdom of dwarf : the forgemaster who stole the piece of metal that Annes gave him
    Which he could not heat up and make equipment with it..
    They are a secret we ask you to look forward to
    and tyyyyyyyyy

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  129. The story is amazing. You are a genius Jac . But um a question when do you Plan to finish the 14th Part of the volume 15?

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  130. Hi I’m new. You book is great! Waiting more than the original. i hope chapter 5 path 14 coming soon after original 14 book.
    Sory my english bad when I write.

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    • It should’ve been out last week, but I’ve lost my inspiration due to my business taking a dive off a cliff, and couldn’t write anything.
      I’ve started writing again this week and was hoping to release the part today but didn’t write enough, so have to push it to Thursday.

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  137. ok, take your time. Your works are really great, its semmes for me nearly not difference with kugane!

    Long live for Ainz Ooal Gown!

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  145. You can do it! you have do the hardest part!

    Now you can do parts with explorers avenntures!

    And the Cosultat also…

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  146. Wow amazing! is what i thought after reading your novel.
    Well you see i am Overlord fan and i had read original novel again and again. Waiting for the new volume i decided to cure my boredom by reading web novel.

    Childish,boredom and utter disappointment ,
    thats what i felt after reading it
    There are some things like turing brain into vampire which is rather a good move in web novel.
    After reading boring web novel at light speed just like Aniz read his documents and reports,I again felt eager to read the next volume of the original author.
    There i remember seeing somethings like volume 15 the Myriad Betrayls.Before reading web novel i thought like what good in reading some random fanfiction.
    But aftering reading disapointing web novel,I thought that reading this would not be far wrosr than web i read,Finally i decided to read it.
    I feel excited due to turings of events. Although the turning of events in this novel are a little different, the orginal the characters didnt change that much which is actually unexpected and follow the flow of volume 11.What different is that while orignal novel use sugar and whip plan,this novel states that Ainz as the god that conquers the world without a need of shedding blood and make ths world a place all races can coexist in peace. Although the turings of events are quite rush it is still acceptable.Also making brain vampire,and humanity strong Mare friends,the character of momon,the nature of wild magic and finally Evileye love for momon,they are undeniably exciting.It is even to the ponit that i forgot the fact that what i was reading was fanfiction.
    Althoughf there are some point that i disliks.Like that of NPC start feeling so callsd emotilns which will eventually lead for self decision. Especially the case with dead knight i start to feel.like you will use that fact to Albedo betrayal in future friday volumes.As a fan i really dont like the fact of albedo betryal and if it really happen,i doubt that i can still read oveelord.The second fact was that fighting scene while original Arthur display Ainz experience in PVP this novel frather loosely fighting scene.I dont mean it does not have but i mean i feel that the fighting scene in this novel.is rather raw .Moreoved it seems that you foreced certain events to uphold such as holy emperor becoming a vassal.It is true that aventures were attracted by Ainz propose,most were low levelled ones and single wihout family or such.And also some life valued adventures will not chose to live in the city govern by undead even after seeing E Rantel.As such vassalization is not something the ruler can decide within such liitle time and although admentite adventures are protectors of human ,there are many ways to handle.Moreover king zanic following Rennee plan which seem uncertain of the result at least to me.And lastly,Cardinals believing that Aniz revive in 2 and a half years which are the words of the Scorceous kingdom,THE POTENTIAL ENEMIE.
    That is all i have ro say. Regardless it really is a good novel.I m glad that i did read this.I deeply thanks the writer for the excitement you give me.Well i am lloking forward for NEXT FRIDAY althought that friday will be in 2021 or 2022

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  148. I would love to read the final part. I swear you got some mad talent and in some parts even exceed the Novels (which at times turn too much on the spot) … especially the Zarnac part i would have loved to see in the novel! There are quite a few very smart twists.

    Ps. i also love those SoL details, AND MOST of all i want to know what happens to Jerx knight 😀
    (hah funny how she ran into the bragging goblins XD)

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  152. Finally caught up to part 18, and can’t wait for 19.

    It looks like updates are rare, but i’d love to see more.

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  154. Thank you so much for this epic volumes , you are legend , i’m sure you can create your own novel easily , please keep going .

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  156. Aquí esperando el siguiente capitulo, y me encanta porque no se aleja de como es Momonga en la novela ligera
    Mi fanfic favorito de overlord despues de ‘Trinidad’

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  160. So I’m an anime-only, never really read books and just started reading this from a random overlord google search. I read a couple of paragraphs and I was instantly won over by the text. I read the whole volume in a single sitting all the while cheering and having physical reactions to the things happening in it. This is unheard of me because I’ve never read a book for longer than 30 minutes. And now, just after finishing the final chapter I find out. THIS WAS A FANFICTION!? Just the fact I didn’t figure it out is proof enough that you are an amazing writer, but that you got me into books? That is an amazing achievement and I applaud you

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  162. last written comment by Jaconue
    August 18, 2020.

    you will continue to be missed.
    hope you are doing ok, wherever you are now.
    o7

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